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Tuesday, August 31, 2021

Persuasive writing. Why I should be allowed a pet echidna.

This week for writing I have been doing persuasive writing about echidna's here is my work:

I think I should get a pet echidna. These are my reasons why.


Firstly, I should be allowed to get echidna because it would keep the house clean.  If I got a echidna it could eat all the bugs that got into the house like ants, spiders, grasshoppers. This is a good thing because it would stop the spiders making webs in the house and the house would not be full of bugs. Secondly, an echidna could eat all the food scraps and this would stop food waste and I wouldn't have to spend as much money on food for it.


Another one of my reasons is for company. If I got a echidna I would play with it in the backyard and at the park. If I was lonely it would cheer me up. I would let it sleep on my bed and on my lap. I would cuddle it every day and this would stop me getting bored and bothering my parents all the time.


Another one of my reasons is responsibility. I feel that it would teach me responsibility by looking after it. I would take it to the vet and all the other stuff it will need. I would clean up after it and all the things it eats.


Therefore in conclusion, having a pet echidna would keep the house clean, it would  keep me company and it would teach me responsibility to look after it. These are the reasons why I should have a pet echidna.


Do you think I should be allowed a pet echidna?

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