Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Wednesday, April 15, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Emilie,
ReplyDeleteGosh your sister Freya is very lucky to have a big sister like you taking care of her. I bet Freya really enjoyed you reading her a book about baby animals.
What other jobs have you helped with at home?
Hi Emilie
ReplyDeleteWhat a great idea for a good deed. Not only was it good for your sister but I bet your mum and day were happy for the help to.
Do you often read to your sister?
Hi Mrs simanu i sometimes do for mum and dad.but sometime she can get a little bit naughty.
DeleteMiharo Emilie,
ReplyDeleteIt is so helpful when siblings are kind to each other by giving their time.
Great recount writing, you have used time sequence words very well making sure it is in order. What is your favourite story to read to Freya?
Mrs Roach
the gruffalos child.
DeleteHi Emilie,
ReplyDeleteYour recount is very clear and in order and you have included heaps of information! Freya looks like she really enjoys the story time with you! Does she like to play games too?
Rachel.
yes she likes to play lego with me.
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