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Wednesday, April 22, 2020

Creative writing with adjectives

Here is my story and brainstorm.



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  1. Melissa LoverApril 22, 2020 at 7:38 PM

    Hi Emilie,
    Fantastic work on your writing this week. Fro all the yellow highlights it is clear to see you have filled your story about Toby with adjectives. I look forward to hearing you share your story tomorrow :)

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  2. Michelle WrightApril 23, 2020 at 9:55 AM

    Hi Emilie,

    I really enjoyed reading your story. Toby and Spike, do sound like they are the very best of friends. I like all the adjectives you have used to describe them both. I can really get a picture in my head about what they look like. What other things do Toby and Spike like to do?

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