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Wednesday, May 6, 2020

Persuasive writing. Children spend too much time doing homework.



1 comment:

  1. Hi Emilie
    Your persuasive writing was very persuasive!
    I like how you have organised your writing into three excellent points about homework.
    You have convinced me that there are many things that children can be doing after school that are fun and good for learning. I like that you have used firstly, secondly and in my opinion, to organise your ideas. Great work

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