I have been learning about Kennings poems. I did have a video to show you some of my Kennings but it wasn't working so I will make a google drawing and put it on my post instead
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, December 23, 2021
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ReplyDeleteEmilie
Well done on completing the kenning poem. I am very impressed by the well chosen words that you selected for your poem. I can see that you put a lot of effort into your poem. You should be proud of your mahi and thank you for sharing it with your fellow bloggers. I am curious, was there a particular animal that you were referring to in your poem? It reminded me of the German shepherd Mojo, he was a fun dog that loved sleeping, and digging in the garden.
I would love to give it a go. Do you have tips for me and your fellow bloggers who would like to create a kenning poem?
Keep up the Super work and I hope to see more of your posts during the Summer Learning Journey!!
Ngā mihi,
Quein
Thank you Quein
Deletethe animal I was thinking about was a hedgehog because they are my favourite animal.Yes I do have some tips
1.) do some rhyming word because It sound more interesting.
2.) maybe put some pictures in with the poem like I did.
Emilie
Kia ora Emilie. Awesome poem and background. I thought it might be a bear but then I realised they wouldn't bite bugs. Remember to enter your poems into the poetry by filling in this form. Then you can visit the other poems on this site.
ReplyDeleteHi Phil
Deleteyes it does sound a bit like bears
thanks for the links
Emilie