Monday, January 11, 2021
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Kia Ora Emilie,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.
I really enjoyed this poetry activity as I love reading and writing poems and summer is my favourite season!
I think your poem is awesome, you stuck to the summer theme well and what you could hear and do during summer. It is awesome to hear that you are having some fun adventures this summer eating ice cream and going swimming. You used a lot of great descriptive words.
Could upload a video of your own featuring your summer sounds. It could be a recording of one of your adventures, the wind or the birds you hear.
Happy Holidays, Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Ngā mihi nui,
Zana Yates